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Vienna, Austria, 2012.
Update 2012-06-19: Now in black and white.
Featured here in iLovePhotographyClub on 2012-06-21.
Featured here by Juno-Janus on 2013-01-04.
Featured here by ZephyraMilie on 2015-03-16.
More of Vienna:
Vienna, Austria, 2012.
Update 2012-06-19: Now in black and white.
Featured here in iLovePhotographyClub on 2012-06-21.
Featured here by Juno-Janus on 2013-01-04.
Featured here by ZephyraMilie on 2015-03-16.
More of Vienna:
Image size
4288x2848px 6.4 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D90
Shutter Speed
1/6 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Mar 25, 2012, 4:56:14 PM
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Now the time has come I critique one of your works^^
(in english so others can read it too <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Razz)"/>)
The first impression is really good! everything looks symmetric, the lines meet in the middle of the picture and the focus is pretty good too <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
The different structures of the wall look awesome too! Above all I like the glossy white because it mirrors the lights and the people!
The lines make the eye move immediately into the center of the picture and give the viewer a oppressive feeling (which is actually good^^). You feel a bit like your are getting absorbed^^
What disrupts me a bit are the colours in the center...the viewer focuses on the purple sign which shouldn't be I think. So maybe you could have made the photo black and white - which will suit the picture very well in my eyes <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
You can also work a bit with the graduation curves and/or the tonal values
Editing often makes your photos better so don't be afraid <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Razz)"/>