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:bulletblack: Vienna, Austria, 2012.
:bulletblack: Update 2012-06-19: Now in black and white.
:bulletblack: Featured here in iLovePhotographyClub on 2012-06-21.
:bulletblack: Featured here by Juno-Janus on 2013-01-04.
:bulletblack: Featured here by ZephyraMilie on 2015-03-16.

More of Vienna:
Saint Stephen's Cathedral by Zouberi Vienna skyline by Zouberi Huetteldorf I by Zouberi Huetteldorf II by Zouberi Heiligenstadt I by Zouberi
Image size
4288x2848px 6.4 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D90
Shutter Speed
1/6 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Mar 25, 2012, 4:56:14 PM
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Now the time has come I critique one of your works^^
(in english so others can read it too <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="=P" title="=P (Razz)"/>)

The first impression is really good! everything looks symmetric, the lines meet in the middle of the picture and the focus is pretty good too <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

The different structures of the wall look awesome too! Above all I like the glossy white because it mirrors the lights and the people!

The lines make the eye move immediately into the center of the picture and give the viewer a oppressive feeling (which is actually good^^). You feel a bit like your are getting absorbed^^

What disrupts me a bit are the colours in the center...the viewer focuses on the purple sign which shouldn't be I think. So maybe you could have made the photo black and white - which will suit the picture very well in my eyes <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

You can also work a bit with the graduation curves and/or the tonal values

Editing often makes your photos better so don't be afraid <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="=P" title="=P (Razz)"/>