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June 17, 2012
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Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D90
Shutter Speed
1/6 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Mar 25, 2012, 4:56:14 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS5.1 Windows
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Schottenring by Zouberi Schottenring by Zouberi
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:bulletblack: Vienna, Austria, 2012.
:bulletblack: Update 2012-06-19: Now in black and white.
:bulletblack: Featured here in #iLovePhotographyClub on 2012-06-21.
:bulletblack: Featured here by !Juno-Janus on 2013-01-04.

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:iconnilanja:
Now the time has come I critique one of your works^^
(in english so others can read it too =P)

The first impression is really good! everything looks symmetric, the lines meet in the middle of the picture and the focus is pretty good too :D

The different structures of the wall look awesome too! Above all I like the glossy white because it mirrors the lights and the people!

The lines make the eye move immediately into the center of the picture and give the viewer a oppressive feeling (which is actually good^^). You feel a bit like your are getting absorbed^^

What disrupts me a bit are the colours in the center...the viewer focuses on the purple sign which shouldn't be I think. So maybe you could have made the photo black and white - which will suit the picture very well in my eyes :D

You can also work a bit with the graduation curves and/or the tonal values

Editing often makes your photos better so don't be afraid =P
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faridaKW Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dragonfly or angel. I like the vanishing point and futuristic vibe of this one.
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Zouberi Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013   Photographer
Thanks and thank you for the faves as well!
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faridaKW Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome :-)
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Bodenlos Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Schönes Bild - die Symmetrie ist perfekt!
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focusgallery Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Professional Photographer
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rxt-images Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Gefällt mir!
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ABipolarTeddyBear Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Photographer
Hi :happybounce:
You've been features for #iLovePhotographyClub's blog for the 21st of June :la:
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