If it's supposed to be shocking, than this is an awesome picture. If not, work on technique a little. Because the focal point is kinda in the middle of the shot, it has a disconcerting feel. All the lines draw your eyes to the middle and owwwwwwwwwww... Also, you have a person in a light jacket standing right near the center of the shot. Kind of the focal point, kind of in the exact middle. So what's wrong with being in the exact middle?? [link] It's not a very satisfying place for the veiwer's eyes to rest. You want the veiwer's eyes to travel around the entire picture, but everything in this photo drags you to the center and keeps you there. ahem. As long as your technique issues were intentional... I LOVE IT.
The angle of the shot is amazing, it really brings out all the perfections, imperfections and details of the architecture. The colours makes the photo look almost dream-like. The photo also shows people walking though a 'seemingly endless' tunnel. I hope that you will appreciate the high rating that I have give your work. Although the shot is very striking, it isn't the most original I have ever seen, but enough so for a 3.5 star rating. I love this photo, am I am happy to have been able to give my opinion and critique it. I am eagerly awaiting more of your amazing art.
Also, you have a person in a light jacket standing right near the center of the shot. Kind of the focal point, kind of in the exact middle. So what's wrong with being in the exact middle?? [link] It's not a very satisfying place for the veiwer's eyes to rest. You want the veiwer's eyes to travel around the entire picture, but everything in this photo drags you to the center and keeps you there.
ahem. As long as your technique issues were intentional... I LOVE IT.
I hope that you will appreciate the high rating that I have give your work. Although the shot is very striking, it isn't the most original I have ever seen, but enough so for a 3.5 star rating.
I love this photo, am I am happy to have been able to give my opinion and critique it. I am eagerly awaiting more of your amazing art.
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